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Fazerta 2

Novel By: animelove
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy, action

I don't know what to say about this one so your going to have to read it and find out. View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 53    Comments: 6    Likes: 4   


     I gripped the tree branch and kicked the warrior knocking the sword from his hands.

     "That's it.

 I have no more patience for you."

He gripped my throat.

I can't breath.

                                                               Meanwhile...

     "I could smell it.

 One of us, A Fazerta.

And a Mlatan.

I better hurry or it might be over for the Fazerta.

I silently ran through th trees, stopping at a clearing.

I sniffed the air.

This is it.

Time to make my move.


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Posted: Aug 24, 2008

its good. ^^

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment.

its good, but a bit short, you will get more comments if you lenghten it.

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm workin on it.

Good.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

good

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.

ooh, the suspense is awesome = )

Posted: Dec 22, 2008

Author Comment:

good that was what i wanted.



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