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Fazerta 3

Novel By: animelove
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy, action

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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


I can't move. My body is too weak. This is it.

I looked around and saw a Mlaton warrior strangling a girl. If I didn't do something fast she might not last much longer. I jumped from the trees and attacked him. He quickly let go of the girl and dodged it.

"Who the hell are you?!"

"Loon, what are you doing to her?!"

"What do you care?"

I gripped my sword."Tell me! Now!"The warrior turned around and grabbed the girl by her hair. "Let her go!" He didn't seem to care what I thought. He pulled on her hair and looked at me.

"This girl... somethings different about her..." The warrior looked at the unconcious girl in admiration.

"What about her?" I lowered my sword.

"She knew that she couldn't beat me. There was a long silence. "But she fought me anyway."Ilooked at him in surprise and then at the girl. "My mission was to kill this girl." He looked down at her.

"Who is she? And why were you sent to kill this girl?"

"Her name is Majestic. I was swnt to kill her because she has powers that could destroy the world. She doesn't know about them yet and we plan to keep it that way. Or at least until she dies."

I looked at the girl and back at the warrior in shock. "Do you have proof?"

"The proof is the sun." I looked at him in confussion. "You will find the answer, soon. I will let her live. But tell her when she wakes up that the next time we meet I won't be so merciful." He let go of her hair and jumped into the woods.

"The proof is the sun? What could he have meant?" I put my sword away. I looked at the girl. She had bruises all over her arms. I knew she had to have been in more than one or two fights. I walked over to Majestic and picked her up. I looked at her. She seemed to be sleeping soundly.


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Comments:

Its very good. ^^

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I'm not even close to how great your stories are.

^^ aww, thanks! *hug*

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

well it's true *hug*

Diz iz an interesting story. LIKE IT!!! And hopefully, u can tell me if u make da 4th part? I dont mind reading it.

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm working on it right now.

much better than the first parts.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!



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