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Fazerta 4

Novel By: animelove
Fantasy


Tags: fantasy, action

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Submitted: Sep 17, 2008    Reads: 70    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


     My head throbbed like crazy like one hundred deer troppeled onto it. I slowly opened my eyes which wasn't very easy especially when they weighed two tons. 

      "Thats funny I don't feel a breeze." I froze and quickly sat up. I wasn't out in the woods. I stood up looking around franticly. "Where am I?" I was shaking now. Was I captured after all? Am I in the warriors territory? Am I being held captive?My lip started to quiver. I bit my lip to stop it from quivering. What am I going to do? If I was captured by one warrior I won't be a match for hundreds of them. Calm down, I can get out of this I just have to stop and think.

I took a deep breath and looked around the room. There wasn't much to see. There was a plain blue drape covering the window. I didn't really get the point of the drapes covering the window to block the light or to keep someone from looking in. The window was so dirty you couldn't even tell if it was morning or night. There was a black bed cover and one stuffed bear that looked like it has been there for years because of all the dust it had collected on it. There was a dresser that was stained brown. Finally I got to where the door was. I quietly walked to the door to make sure the floor would't creak. I pressed my ear against the door. I waited for 2 quiet minutes. I slowly opened the door just wide enough for me to peer out. I looked down a long hallway which seemed to lead to five other rooms. I slipped out the door slowly closing the door behind me. I turned around and hit something hard. I slowly looked up afraid to see what I ran into.

     "Where are you going?" Before I could answer the wind was knocked out of me. I fell to the ground lookig up at him. He had black hair and black eyes that showed no feeling.

Whats going on? I..I........


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tell me what you think.Please.

Posted: Sep 17, 2008

sounds like she was kidnapped by those warriors.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

you'll just have to wait and find out.

You are getting a lot better at writing your Fazerta story.

Posted: Sep 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment. I still have a long ways to go to being a good writer. I can't wait to read your stories. You never really seem to put new writing on your page.

very good. ^^

Posted: Sep 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks.

this is great and creepy. she must be really unlucky.

Posted: Dec 22, 2008

Author Comment:

yah she is thats why she is so goth and hates the world.



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