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The Battle For Ikriam

Novel By: FunnyBunny
Fantasy


Desperate to save her late Father's Kingdom from Vappu, Sage the Elf has to do battle with enemies and her own fears. View table of contents...

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1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18

Submitted: Sep 15, 2007    Reads: 23309    Comments: 41    Likes: 10   


 

CHAPTER 15

Vappu sent one of the slave boys to meet Liskin.  While waiting for them, she started to pack.  She was to stay with Liskin in his camp while the Dark Elves destroyed Ikriam. 

 

Vappu walked from her closet to the window and looked out.  What she saw made her heart beat faster.  Thousands of torches burning, thousands of feet walking.  Liskin was supposed send guards with the slave boy.  Vappu ordered them to come through one specific secret tunnel only she and Gadwalader knew about.  All she had to do was wait.

 

Vappu finished packing essential possessions and sat on her bed.  She could hear the elves running up and down the corridors.

 

"The Dark Ones are coming!" some shouted.  Others stood and sobbed, paralized with fear.

 

"Oh, what a bunch of girls!  Crying is not going to help you now. You had this coming." Vappu thought.

 

She heard a soft knock on her door.  She hurriedly unlocked the door and opened it.

 

The slave boy and the soldiers were waiting for her.  Vappu flinched.  She forgot how intimidating Dark Elves were.  Vappu was tall in her own right but these creatures were well over six feet tall. Vappu had to look up as she was only 5'8".  The three Elves pushed her away from the door and entered the room.

 

"Would you not push me around, my friends" Vappu hissed.

 

"We have orders" the tallest of the three roared "we fetch you without being caught. You are not that important.  You can die."

 

"Oh, aren't you friendly" Vappu snapped.  She walked towards the elf and slowely said while poking him on the chest "Don't try me, buddy.  Liskin and I have a deal.  And as you know, you work for him. We are associates now so I guess that means you work for me."

 

"Woman, I will slice your head off if you keep mocking me."

 

"Shut your mouth! Liskin will have your head if he knows how you talk to m..."

 

"Will both of you keep quiet!" the slave boy whispered. "We have no time. Come at once!"

 

Vappu handed her belongings to the elf and smiled.

 

"Now boys. Watch carefully.  Watch how the great Kingdom of Ikriam falls."


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Comments:

YAY!!!
Oh, How I hate Vappu, I should right a poem about how much I hate that woman...
Hahahahahag..
Dark Elves even hate her!!!
Heheheheheheheheh!!!
Oh I love it, Thank You SOOOOOOO much for writing, it is truly amazing!!!
Btw, I'm not sure you read my story 'Destiny's Choice'
BUT, the 6th chappie is up and ready!!!!

SEVENTY STARS!!!

Posted: Sep 15, 2007

Author Comment:

yeah you can call it "How much Ape hates Vappu" or something hahahahaha - I'll get on your story asap, i'm just at work now but will read!! Thank you!!!

I love the story, best fantacy I can't wait for more. I hope you write another chapter very soon.

Posted: Sep 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm really glad you like the story!! I'll publish asap. Thank you for reading and commenting!

Mh! now who will be the ruler of Ikraim at last? some has to get rid of that evil elf Vappu at last. I love the story I'll be waiting for more.

Posted: Sep 18, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for your lovely comment. I'll publish next chapter asap and I really hope you'll like it! Thank you again for reading this far.

Wow, I've been sticking with you chapter after chapter with great pleasure, this chapter is awesome as usual. The dark elves are cool as heck, and no they do not hate Vappu, they hate elves in general. Considering that she is being treated very well. Now the true question is what will happen to Ikriam, will it be invaded by dark elves or will Sage fight back and win back her father's lands. Keep up the good work.

Posted: Sep 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Hey thank you so much. I'm glad to hear ur still enjoying this. I've been working on a new novel, The Fruitless Life, so check it out if you want to but i'll get back to this one asap!

i'm glad someone is fianlly taking vappu down a notch. still, why would she want to destroy her own kingdom, instead of milik it for all its wealth, power, and pleasure? i mean, what'd she want it for in the first place.... did she love this liskin person and want to give it to him to win his heart? is she capable of love after all thats happened to her?

*once again shuts up and goes to see... skip skip skip*

Posted: Feb 17, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha ur funny. i'm glad ur interessted in the rest. u'll just have to see what vappu's up to...thnx for read & comment

wow! i really liked it and the rest too!

Posted: Mar 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Rose.

me no likey vappu.
grrrr
but once again, marvelous chapter!!

Posted: Mar 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Alice!

Dark Elves are awesome. Hehehe, yes I love evil things I don't know why, good in stories isn't as interesting to me.

I guess this is why my name is DarkFairy, lol.

Marvelous chapter!

~DarkFairy~

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

HAha yes they are amusing! Thanx

you got a new fan i like it =p good job
you should come check out my stuff i just started but tell me what ya think
more to come!=p

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Mikedigz!

you got a new fan i like it =p good job
you should come check out my stuff i just started but tell me what ya think
more to come!=p

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'll check it out asap.

Nice story, Cant believe people can write so good for so long.... Your talented... Check my account out

~KinkyBoots~

Posted: Apr 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Kinkyboots. I sure will.

omg look how many ppl have read it!!! everyday i come on and i see this at the top! Well done!!!

Posted: Apr 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha thank you James. Nobody is more surprised than me. Thanx for the comment

Why is Vappu being mean to everyone? Isn't she supposed to be nice to the people assisting her in her evil schemes? Gosh... I don't like her at all...

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

I think she has two personalities...she's crazy

karrima
(not registered user)

conne de mirde

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Huh?

you are so getting a new fan i love it so much best fantacy i have read in a long time... i wish this much people would read my poems

Posted: May 8, 2008

Author Comment:

hahaha Thank you. I'm so shocked i dont even say anything anymore!! HahahahhaHah. I think people read it by mistake...its not that good but if you enjoy it THANK YOU. I accepted you as a fan. Thanx again.

HELLO YOU ARE REALLY TRYING. YOUR WRITING IS GOOD JUST KEEP IT. NICE JOB

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

HELLO YOU ARE REALLY TRYING. YOUR WRITING IS GOOD JUST KEEP IT. NICE JOB

Posted: May 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

bethany
(not registered user)

that story was amazing u rock and writting LOL!!!!!!!!

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the lovely comment!

this is horrible... why waste your time!!???

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

You wasted your time not me....

wow the person who said this is horrible...why waste your time is soooo wrong. I love your writing. It makes me crave more and makes a little movie in my head. It's good write some more so I can read and see what happens.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you shelby for your comment. It was nice of you. I'm a bit busy but I'll post soon.

How can someone call himself a book hater and still be on this site. you rock! i enjoyed it. check out my diaries. be happy to be a fan.

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!

interesting to say the least ill have to read a bit more.

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

This is actually the only Chapter I read. Really like your writing style, and will start from the beginning to see what the heck is going on. I get this great picture in my mind of these characters, even though I know nothing about them. Very effective use of creating a huge picture out of minimal words, which is something I tend to struggle with. Thanks for getting this up.

Posted: Jun 22, 2008

Author Comment:

My pleasure and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

CONGRATS U GOT A NEW FAN.... REALLY ENJOYED THE CHAPTER U GOT TREMENDOUS TALENT

I'M kinda knew soo can u check my stuff out and leave me comments

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I will and thank you

I'm kind of embarrassed to say that this is the first chapter I read from u, even more disappointed that I didn't start from the 1st chapter becuz this is actually interesting work. From reading this chapter only, I notice a sense of vileness in Vappu. i'll definetely have to start from scratch

If you could I'd really luv it if u could read my new novel: Ghen-Lee: The Blaze Warrior whenver you have the chance

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Jeff and I'll have a look

please read my essay and give your comment.
thanks
sanyal

Posted: Jul 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Please leave comments like this on my profile page Sanyal. Thanx

Hey, I love this story! It's so cool! Are you going to write more to your story? Oh yeah, btw, is it ok if you can read my prologue The Many and see what you think of it. Thanks.


P.S. I think this story should be rated five stars!

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx so much. Yess I'll write more. I'll get to yours. I'm just really busy at the moment

Nice
(not registered user)

very interesting read

Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

vappu_hater
(not registered user)

I.

hate.

Vappu.


Posted: Jul 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank.you. lol

I really enjoyed reading this chapter i will have to go back and read it from the beginning now.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. hope you like it

every time i turn on my screen . you are the first person i see , so thought i'd better look in , i will read the book in it's entirity before i comment ,
just wanted to say hello first , so we are not strangers when i do comment .
terry

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you Terry

really good stuff, i hope to match up to this, one day ^_^, check out my story,its go sum pronlems but i try. agian, really awesome story.

Posted: Aug 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.

Cool.


Please read and comment on my book The Hidden Assassin

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and I will

Coxxacktree
(not registered user)

WTF!!

Pretty ordinary piece of writing I must say. I wonder why so many people are glued to it. I know. It's out of sheer curiosity as this is the first piece that pops up. If this is the kind of literary standard this website possesses, I will pass. I just wanted to try it out but I think the good old writer's club at the end of the street is anyday a better option.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you

Very creative story. I wonder what will happen in the end? Looking forward to more.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you

Vappu *poke* haha
"Woman, I will slice your head off if you keep mocking me."

made me lol for real, no lie :)

i like how you give just enough details to make the scenes clear but not so much to make it overkill! great job!

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you BlackPointe. I loved your comment

I love it! I only read this chapter and already I LOVE it! Can you check out my first chapter of my novel, Im new on Booksie so yea? Its called "Questions Left Un Answered"

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you and will do

Can you comment on it too?

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Of course

Danial
(not registered user)

Ikriam... sounds like the game. Vappu? Wtf?
Go eat your poop

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Whatever...jelousy



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