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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Sep 30, 2008    Reads: 230    Comments: 9    Likes: 0   


Chapter 10

 

When Zonica woke up she was in Christians arms he was carring her up some stairs and through some doors so she took the liberty to look around but when she saw that they are now in a bedroom her gaze shot to Christian not sure what his intentions were she inspects his face, he was looking down at her and a small smurk was trying to brake through in one corner of his mouth

 

Christians POV

 

When we arrived at the mantion Zonica was still sleeping; Macalister didn’t want to wake her up so I was asked to carry her up to her room that thay have set up for her by the time we reached the end of the stairs she started to sture in my arms so I looked down to see her eyes open slowly flutter open.

She is one strange being everything she does is just like a vampires movements so graceful.

 

The thought of her staying here with a mantion full of vampires should be interesting we havent had a guest in who knows how long and the only other female in this place is Sam so this should be a very interesting experience especially when the others find out that’s she is finaly here and with that thought a smurk grew on my lips and I looked at Zonica

 

I leaned down with one knee on the bed and laid Zonica gently down when her entire body stiffend

 

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Zonica’s  POV                                                                                                                                                                                           

 

I looked up at Charistian and the smurk on his face I felt that worry started to radiate through my body and fear crept up shortly after that.

My body grew tense when he put his knee on the bed and laide me there that smurk never leaving his face

When I was finaly on the bed and out of his grip I moved away from him immediately, pushing myself into the wall and covering myself with the pillows putting as much distance between us ,I put my knees up to my chest and peeked out from behind them to see what Christian’s next move is going to be.

 

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“Zonica” Christian asked with a questioned look on his face because of her reaction but then his eyes grew wide

 

“O’ My Goodness  Zonica, no…no…no…no…no!!!” Cristian said backing away and putting up his hands up in defence to show her that wasn’t his attentions

 

But Zonica just stared at him and her eyes never leaving his, she started to shake not wanting to go through it all again what she went through with Brian she had trusted Christian more than she should have and now she’s not sure.

 

Why, why is this all happening to me she thought to herself shaking her head and tears started to form but she held them back as best she could.

 

Christian new if he does anything now that things would get ugly so he backed off and headed to the door

 

“I’ll get Mecalester” he said before he left the room

 

Mecalester’s POV

 

I was busy telling the servants where all the luggage should go when Christian came running down the stairs with worry written over his face and clearly in destress

“You … you should … get up there …” Christian said between breaths

 

I looked at him not knowing what he is talking about but then Zonica poped into my head and I started to get worried not waisting any time with questions I ran upstairs

I got to the door of Zonica’s room and stopped, looking into the room she was nowhere to be seen I took a few steps forward and called out her name but got no response so I franticly started to pace form one side of the room to the other searching for her but couldn’t find her anywhere

 

“CHRISTIAN!!!” I shouted from the top of the stairs and he came running up to me wide eyed and worried

 

“I can’t find her” I said through grinding teeth

 

Charistian gasped in horror “This isnt good”

 

“You telling me; she doesn’t ever know that she is in a mantion with vampires yet and when anyone of them find her before we can tell them who she is … UGH I don’t even want to think of what will happen” Macalester said frustrated and worried

 

 

Zonica’s POV

 

I don’t know where I was going I was running down so many corridors and all of them looked the same and by now I know that I am hopelessly lost but I didn’t care I just wanted to get away and think things through

By now new thoughts has entered my mind and now I doubt my choices

 

Have I made the right decision to come here and to trust Macalester when he said that I’ll be safe or to slightly open up to Christian and start to trust him.I cant truly say that I know Macalister, I have only spoken to him now and again .I don’t actually know what type of person he is now why do I trust him so much and why do I feel like there is more to all this that I know of. All these choice’s I have made witch one of them was the ones I can trust?

 

 

 


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Comments:

YAy that was fast lol it was really good

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Again Wow!!! lol

I'll update asap

i just now saw ur comment lol i love it

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you love it :)

arghhhh man you tease! and wow that was a new twist...looks like Macalester and christian are going to have a hard time getting her trust...UPDATEEEEE
does she know she is in a house full of vampires????
please tell me when ya update

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL :)
glad you like it and yea it looks like thay have there work cut out for them lol

will do

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Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL!!! looks like ya have a lot of time LOL!!!

will do my best
asap

Alexia
(not registered user)

DITTO

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

HEHEHE! Christian is funny...i like him! he should be her new brian...except NOT abusive! lol =D

+Hecate+

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL ,we'll you'll just have to wait and see...
(will let ya know when i update again)

Oh geez... I hope they find her before she is discovered and eaten for dinner...MUAHAHAHA!

I kno, I'm a dork...

Update soon..

Posted: Oct 8, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL you'll have to wait and see

will update as soon as i can ,have a few other things to take cear of first

thanx for reading

HEY EVERYONE

( PLZ READ MY NEWS )
HAVE BAD AND GOOD NEWS

Posted: Oct 11, 2008

Death words
(not registered user)

hope she gonna have a demon babby to eat brian! lol lol hahahahahahahahahahahah very good

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that woud be funny =)



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