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Choice's

Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Oct 13, 2008    Reads: 274    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Chapter 11

ZONICAS P.O.V

I have been running for some time now and know that I am hopelessly lost and that there is no hope of getting out of here by myself.

I know Macalister and Christian is looking for me and Macalister is probably worried about me like he always is, but I have to get away and think.

Maybe I’me just stupid for running off like that, but I must say it was kind of funny to see Chistian worry for once, he’s always so confident and full of life.

It was weard to see him act that way aswell; not knowing wich way to react and then just run off like that. Its like he saw something scary, but my question is way did I react like that it bothers me the most.

Have I been scarred that deeply by Brian that I would flinch at every fast movement? Has he realy gotten to me that much that I would question everyone around me and not trust them even the people that are trying to make friends or the once trying to help me and protect me from the unknown.

Macalester seems so determined to help and see that I am save, that I feel like a fool for reacting like I am.

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Getting tired Zonica slowed her pace and started to walk, slowly catching her breath but never letting her guard down and staying aware of her seroundings but also very confused because everything looks the same, well mostly everything …

She gave up trying to get outside so she stoped and looked around.she then realized the beauty that the place holds and everything around her the walls and lights; thay are like half of a chandelier hanging of the creamy color walls the light gave off a warm and comforting feeling and the floor was tiled out with a light colored stone and a brown and beige colored carpet ran right through the middle of it.

There is a paintings that hags on the walls, most of them are very beautiful and old but the most captivating painting of all is the painting at the end of the hall close to two large doors leading to an unknown place but she is not interested in that right now it’s a painting of five figures, four men and one woman that in a strange way she felt drawn to it.

The figures is standing in what looks like a office with large bookshelf’s on the left full of old books and a gorgeous fire place on the right side of the figures but the figures themselves looks extraordinary extravagant.

They stand with so much dignity and grace like statues carved only by angels.

There faces are so captivating that you can’t help but stare at them.

The men they stand so strait and yet with so much grace and poise that it looks inhuman and that not one human can pull that off.

The woman sitting in a chair in-between the four men is beyond beautiful she sits with pride and grace.

She has long dark brown hair and looks like she can take on the world. She is truly one of a kind she is wearing a Victorian dress and her hair is dun up perfectly with loose strands hanging down her left shoulder there is no words to describe her beauty .

The first man on the left has long dark hair that goes just a little past his shoulders it’s an almost black color or dark brown she can’t be sure he looks tall and well built the emotion that the painter put on his face makes him look so distant and he looks sad and lonely but then with the way he stands he looks tough like he is able to endure hardship or pain he also has this mystery vibe to him but its sad to see that he tries to hide it behind anger and violence how the painter got all this in is really fascinating

The second man standing next to him is blond with spiky hair and he is not as tall as the first one but almost there he looks to be a foot shorter than him. He has a wild side to him he looks very enthusiastic but dangerous and with his attire he looks like a bad boy and a player he is build very buff and muscular

The third man is very tall and slim and in very good physical shape. He looks elegant, graceful and archaic his eyes and face shows wisdom and age you can clearly see authority and the power to influence others based on recognized knowledge and expertise and his hair color is a silvery/gray, it reaches his lower back

The fourth guy is young and it looks like Christian

“It can’t be” she thought out loud

But it is, it is Christian he looks exactly the same and he hasn’t change one bit he still has his bad boy hair cut and his tall, nicely built body and he still looks so full of energy and arrogant but kind and thoughtful

But the painting looks centuries old you can see it from the condition it’s in and the smell although it is well taken care of.

MACALISTER’S P.O.V

Christian and I have decided to split up to look for her it might go faster and I don’t think that she is in that much danger but I don’t want to take my chances, you never know.

One thing is sure the one vampire I don’t want her to run into is Duncan you never know with that man, but I don’t think he will be too happy or take it lightly that she is already here. He doesn’t understand any of my actions and always question me.

But they all agreed to do me this one favor but he isn’t happy about that he doesn’t want any humans around the castle and the worst is that she will soon find out that they are and I have now idea how she is going to react he doesn’t think she is going to take it likely.

I will rather take her reaction to the news that have to have told him that she is the wife of a notorious vampire hunter he almost went ballistic but thank goodness for Soren being there to prevent any disaster but in the end Duncan agreed to her being here but he doesn’t want to see her and she must stay away from him then there will be no problem.

The others think that it will be interesting to have some company and are looking forward to having her at the castle but Sam was disappointed that it’s another female but I think she is scared of competition because she is use to being the sinter of attention, she’ll get over it

CHRISTIAN’S P.O.V

“UGH” Macalister can overreact sometimes.

She will be fine … I think, but I am not so sure if she runs into Duncan though but it should be funny and interesting to see his reaction and the look on his face when he meets her it should be good.thay all think she is human just wait untill thay find out that she doesn’t have a sent or that you don’t know when she is coming because you cant feel her precans, she is covering it somehow this ora serounds her and it is getting stronger and making things very dificult to find her ,not knowing witch way because I cant smell her or hear her; not even her heart beat.

I would have like to hear it race when she runs into Duncan it will probbaly jump right out of her chest I know if my heart could beat like any onther human heart that it would have stoped by now he is one scary dude and it would have made tings harder to hide from him he could just pick it up by my heart beat that’s way I am glad our heart beats is one constant beat never changing and our bodys isnt that cold as the storys the humans come up with.

Another reason way we fit in so well.

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When she was finiched examening the painting she turned her attention to the two large doors it’s a dark mehogany wood door with Golden frames and golden handels.

It looks so smooth and the two colours fit together so perfectly I’t complements the whole hallway it realy doesn’t look so odd and out of place

Zonica approached the large doors and a slide her hand along the frame of the door feeling the texture and taking in all detales and making her way to the door handles and opende the door it didn’t feel that heavy or made any noise when it opend it was fearly light and eazy … she was about to look for any life in the room befor her breath was lost to see such beauty that this room held every thing is so extreamly extravigant its got an old look to it almost victorian but not realy.

The bed post is very old it’s made of sleepperwood and its canopy has deep red drapes haning from it.

The bedding was a mixture of red, black and brown with matching pillows.the floor has a wood texture and the carpet by the bead and the love seat is maroon color and the curtains haning by the beautyful arch window was a eligant red and the window seat was cusioned with the same eligant red and black pillows .There was a fireplace that was burning and a door on each side of it. There was also a cherry wood desk close to the window and bookshelfs that reaches to the roof.

Even though the colours make the room look so dark it still as a relaxing and warm feeling, she would have never imagined that so much dark colors could compliment each other so perfectly.

She slowely made her way to the window seat and sat down staring outside you can almost see all the way to the horison and you can see the mountans and the forest serounding the castle with rivers and dams with waterfals and perfect open space with wild flowers and wildlife she stared in aw at the beaytyful scene.

Taking time to take it everything in she felt her eyes get heavy and her body begging her to rest so she decided to nap for just a few minutes lying down on the window seat she made herself comfortable and sa soon as she laid down her head she fell into a deep dreamless sleep.

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Hey i did my best for a long chapter and fixed all the spelling so if there is still a few more then i am sorry about that

hope ya like it and comment on it

thanx

xxNatsxx

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

cutiepo0
(not registered user)

hey! I really like your story. Just a couple things (no offence intended)- choice's means "belonging to choice" unless that is what you intended it should be
-choices- and then there really are a LOT of spelling mistakes-have you considered using the peer editing on mic. word or just show it to someone else before you post it? I hope you don't take my advice the wrong way. I really, really like your story.

(btw I have an account-same name-just not signed in)

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for the comment and taken no offence,Thanx for the help

there is a program that i use for the spelling it's Oxford Reference suite its a box set of 3 CD's
(Oxford English Dictionary/Thesaurus of English/Dictionary of Quotations)

*☺☻☺♥Please update soon!!!!♥☺☻☺*

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

=D Will do...thanx

yeah i agree there are a few typo's but not spelling mistakes just different words...like you wrote 'sent' when i think you might have meant 'scent'?
...but i don't really mind...can't be always perfect...and it sounds the same so i get the point...please update,,,oo wonder how the female will react to the competition and how duncan will react...can't wait...literally...update soon! :)

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for the comment
you do not understand how much i appreciate it.
I'll fix the tipo's when i can ...
thanx a bunch

and for the different words,sorry IF thay confused ya
but glad ya understand ...

Death words
(not registered user)

well to be honest i like the twist oh and dont mind what otha ppl say bout your spelling anymre we can atleast understand what you are sayin so im happy and dont really care just keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for the comment
i feel beter now LOL

ans will do



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