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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Oct 16, 2008    Reads: 126    Comments: 10    Likes: 0   


Chapter 12

Christian’s P.O.V

I was running allover the castel but still havent found Zonica

“Where the hell can she be…?” I was getting a bit frustrated with this whole situation, when I saw something from the corner of my eye.

I stoped dead in my tracks and turned on my heels and face that direction for sure my heart skipped a beat if that’s even possible

Duncan carried Zonica bridal stile. She looked like she was unconscious

So I ran to him but stopes dead in my tracks once again when a soft warning growl erupted from his throat and he just walked pass me so I followed him but kept my distance watching his every move.

When I finaly got over the shock of what just happened I realized that we were almost at Zonicas room.

When we turned the corner I saw Macalaster standind there infront of her door, frozen in shock and his mouth hanging open and his eyes wide but he pulled himself together quicker than I thought he would when he saw me folowing.

Duncan didn’t care about our reaction to what he is doing, he just completely ignored us both when we reached her room door Macalster extended his arms to take her from him but another warning growl erupted from his throat and Macalester back off and out of Duncan’s way.

He walked into her room and laid her gently down on the bed and coverd her up with a blanket then brushed a few loos strand of hair out of her face and then he just disappeared into thin air

Macalister and I were staring dumbfounded at the spot were Duncan use to stand a few seconds ago when Macalistare asked me a question that I didn’t hear so I slowely turned my head to face him

“Did … did that just happen?” he asked me again and looked back at the empty spot

“Did what just happen?” a voice asked from behinde us that actualy made us jump for a second and that made the person luagh I spun around “Ivan … what the hell man” I shouted and Macalester closed my mouth with his hand and wisped

“You gonna wake her ---”but was cut off by Ivan

“O’ is she here …She is here …Can I see … what does she look like … come on man can I just have a peek” Ivan asked all at once while trying to push past Christian

Macalister removed his hand from Charitian’s mouth while Christian holds back Ivan.

Macalaster alooked back into the Zonicas room to see that she isnt awake and closed her door softly. And staired at the both of us he ran his hand trough his hair and shook his head.

“Christian keep Ivan away from here wile she sleep we don’t want a repeat of what just happened, don’t think I can take any other surprisess today” and with that he walked away shaking his head

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Sorry I know its short but I ran out of time. Will make the next one a long chapter to make up for this one

=)

Nats

altPic of Charistian


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*☺☻☺♥Please update soon!!!!♥☺☻☺*

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Will Do asap...=)

me likey :) update soon pwease!!!

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL Will do asap
Thanx

update soon please!

+Hecate+

Posted: Oct 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do...

love it post soon meaning now okay lol

Posted: Oct 17, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL Thanx
will do asap

wow, protective are they..hehe...auww the pic isn't showing on my computer...HMPH!..ooo wonder how Ivan will react..update soon please>

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL ... will do thanx

hmmmm...did the big mean duncan fall for z....ummmm....UPDATE SOOON

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL you'll just have to wait and see ...
will update asap

short but sweet! another great chapter!! cant wait for the update ;)

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx very much
i'll update asap

i'm yearning to know whats is happening to z.....pleaseeeeee

Posted: Oct 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do my best to update a few chapters this weekend and in the week and let you know when i do

ps: i am buzy with chap 13 but want to post it with chapter 14 and 15 if i can

but will update ASAP

I loved it its great but the pic didn't show up.

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx glad u like it and i am trying to fix the pic prob ...

Death words
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sweet and short thats how i like it. the pic doesnt sh0ow

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

short and sweet =D
it will on the next page "i think"



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