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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Nov 13, 2008    Reads: 110    Comments: 11    Likes: 0   


Chapter 15

Zonica suddenly sat up strait and breathing fast and heavy she realized that she woke from another nightmare yet again looking aroung she realized where she was and feeling cramped as her body was tangled in her bedding.She looked at her alarm clock and the red light flashed 3am.cursing she desided to get out of bed, it has become a roottean by now and wake-up everyday at 3am without fale.

It’s dark and there is no movement or sound that indicate that anyone els is awake

She made her way to the bathroom and washed the sweat off her face with cold water hoping that the nightmares will wash away with it. She has been having dreams some even nightmares for the past few weeks and thay are getting more and more vivid every time.

Finaly she gave up trying to wash her nightmares away and left the bathroom

Standing in her room, she considerd going back to bed but decided otherwise not wanting the nightmares to come beck she felt the need to get out of her room and the urge to go outside for fresh air.

“She took some grey sweats and sweater with a black spagetti strap top from her cupboard and put them on with some running shoes, she brushed her hair and teeth and heading out her door

I wish Macalister was here there are a few things I want to talk to him about especially this dreams that I have been having, well I am not sure if its dreams of flashes of something it’s strange, I can remember most of it; it’s like a story in my head and every night there will be a new picture. It’s probably nothing but yet it seems so familiar to me. I don’t know why that is though

It’s like a puzzle that needs solving and I don’t know where to find the missing pieces and that’s what’s so frustrating, I feel that I have to know this. I just don’t know why” she thought wile she made a few turns down some hallways and whent down a few stairs untill she entered the entrance hall. Taking her time she examines the place.

It was pretty big and had marble floors typically variegated, exhibiting different colours in irregular patches and streaks and having the structure and form of a crystal with golden angels on the ceiling spreadind there hand out to the sky and some of them holding instruments she was staring in awe when a voice interupted her

“Its breathtaking isnt it” the person asked also looking up at the ceiling in wonder.

Very” She answed back looking at where the person was standing.

“Very” she said again a little softer than a wisper when she saw this man leaning against one staue and looking like one himself, admiring the way he looked full of mystery and well there is something puzzeling and difficult to explain but in a way I feel that there is more, something familiar, something that I am missing, Something I should know but cant put my finger on.

Staring at him trying to remember him but cant seem to place his face anywere she gave up shaking her head

“Who are you, if you don’t mins me asking?”

“Well seeing that this is where I stay and I have never seen you around here … I would say that” Pausseing for a second and pushing himself off the wall and making his way closer to her “that is my question to ask, don’t you think”

Yes, I gess it is … but … how do I know that you’re not lying?”

“Mmmm… now that’s a good point”

“Can you prove that you live here?”

“Mmmmm … Yes, but will you believe me?

Looking at the guy staring now at her, she didn’t breake the eye contact between them and contemplating his question, Should she believe him could she trust him?

She doesn’t feel that her live is in any danger not if you count that, all she could think of was the impossibility of keeping herself undercontrol with a pair of very intens hazel eyes looking at her.

“I ... I gess we will have to see”


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I like!!!

Posted: Nov 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Then i am Glad!!!

OOHHHHH!!! she'll probably find out now about them!! YAY!

+hecate+

Posted: Nov 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Maybe, then again Maybe not

you'll have to wait and see LOL

will let ya know when i update again

I DONT TRUST HIM
I THINK
BUT I DOOO LOOOVVVVEEE CHRISTAN
TRUST HIM NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWW!!!`

Posted: Nov 13, 2008

Author Comment:

O' and why not trust him?
lol
***
Yea i also like Christian
he is sweet

thanx for the comment
will let ya know when i update.

Hey nice work

The other Vamps have got real attitude problems me think, can't wait to read more

Thanks for the updates and keep me posted pls

Posted: Nov 14, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL
glad ya like it
will do

Thanx

me likey :)

i cant wait to read more and see what happens with the vampires!!!

Posted: Nov 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you like
=)

it might take some time or not...

will try and update asap
befor the next weekend ...

will let ya know


great update...i'm on the fence w/ the new guy...want to learn more about duncan

Posted: Nov 18, 2008

Wow. Great story. Cant wait to read more of it.

Posted: Nov 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx glad you like it

there is a few chapters missing inbetween so i was thinking about rewriting it and then post more chapters it wont take me long , i dont think
but i'll keep ya posted

thanx for reading and commenting

team christian....lol!
hmm gues we will have to wait and find out...can't wait!
please update soon!

Posted: Nov 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey thanx for the comment just want ya to know that i'll update asap but cant make any updates for a few weeks my Baby was born on the 22Niv and i wont be posting for a few weeks... I have to get use to having a baby around.

I dont think it will take to long then i will be updating again ... and alot ... !

will let ya know when i do update

=)
team christian....lol *yea he is one of a kind*

i kind of like it when im not on for a long time because then you guys have a bunch of updates for me to read when i do get on :) :) :) and these updates were FABULOUS! i can see you getting better with each chapter and im really enjoying this novel :) two thumbs up ;D

Posted: Dec 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx =)
glade ya like it

i am working on updateing hopefuly in this upcoming week
i'll keep you updated
thanx for the comment

Death words
(not registered user)

wow great but just 1 kak thing its finished noooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update update update nnnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL !!!
=D
will do asap

Grant
(not registered user)

wow you great with this whole writing story its like you a natuaral wow its great just when i started getting into the story it ended no please give me a call when you have updated i would really like to know whats happening next or just email me the next chapter please. mwa

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

GLAD you like it

and will do (*as soon i i know who you are*)
sorry that i forgot, but i am realy puzzeld??? Mmmmmmm...

sorry

but still glad you like it so far, will update asap



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