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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 304    Comments: 10    Likes: 1   


CHAPTER 3
I was woken by a voice and footsteps echoing around me. Hes voice is carrying a slight sence of mixed emotions.I lay’d there pretending to be sleeping but actualy listening to some of the conversation.I havent cought all of it so I couldn’t make sense of it though but just to hear his voice makes me feel calm and it seems so familliar like a long forgotten dream.
*Conversation*

“I am sure”*pause*“I can’t, it isnt safe for …”*pause*“You don’t understand…”*pause*“Yes sur, but sur…”*pause*“Well …you’ll have to see for yourself, I can’t …”*pause*“Yes I understand, but…”*pause*“Very well sur”

*End of Conversation*

With a sigh, there was a moment of silence; all you can hear was our breathing, mine was hard and unbearable probably because I was breathing through my mouth and his soft and gentile almost like a wisper

Then his footsteps come closer and I felt his warm hand against my face his fingertips bearly touching, he let out a sigh and then let go.

When he finaly left the room, I started to think about his conversationWho was he talking to; what isnt safe and what should the other person see for himself. Was he talking about me?No he couldn’t have been, there is nothing special about me that he could possibly be talking about me or is there?

Shaking her head from all the thoughts that doesn’t consurn her, she looked at her surroundings she realized that she is in a small room the walls a light peach.there is a small light brown table in the corner with frech mixed flowers if it wasn’t for the hospital bed she was in she would have never guess were she was
Just then it hit her “OMG! Brian … what’s the time”she half shouted.Looking around in a panic, she spots a clock in the hall way 5:30 am.“OK…; OK…; OK…!!! Brian wakes up at 6:30; I still have time to make it home” she said calming herself.

Getting out of bed she takes out the needles out of her arm and the IV off.she spots her clothes on the chair in the corner of the room and got dressed in no time to waist and ran out the door and down the hall taking a sharp corner to fast to stop she ran into someone, hitting the person head on nocking the air out of her; she almost fell back but was held up by stromg muscular arms she twitched in his arms gasping for air she pushed out of his grip holding her chest her breathing hard and short she said sorry to the person standing infront of her not looking up into the persons face she could see it was a man by the formal clothing he was wearing and the fancy shoes he was wearing .He took a step forward and she steped back holding her hand out to stop him; he then asked in a deep, musical voice that could put anyone in a trans if he wanted to “Are you Ok”.Pulling herself together she slowly lookes up from the floor looking at his features untill she met his face.Glaring at him fascinated by his gorgeous features (with his sky blue eyes and his rose red lips and his wavy goldenblond hair) He smirked and bent down to wisper in her ear ”Breath or you'll turn blue” staring at him dumb founded she realized that she stopped breathing. she took a deep breath and then sighed looking down before she could think of anything to say, she got interupted by a voice Dr Macalister voice calling to her from down the hall to wait. Then she snaped back to reality and knew that she has waisted enough time standing there and stairing at the stranger.

“I…I have to go…;” she said hard enough for both men to hear and ran pass the the stranger and thru the exit.


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OOOooh. Really good.

+hecate+

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

nice.....update now! ha

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL
will do asap

oooo! pudate! NOW! ((and yes i said pudate, deal with it!))

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL
Will do asap

ooh i like it update pweez

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you like it.
Will update asap

Ha she's going crazy good writing tell me when you update!!!

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Will do thanx.

great chapter! you really make use of details very well :)
cant wait for the update!!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx very much ...
I'll update soon

COME BAK PLZZZ U HAVE TO POST JUST HAVE TOO LOL

Posted: Sep 1, 2008

Author Comment:

lol... will do asap

very intense story...i like it

Posted: Oct 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx, i am glad

hmmmmm wonderful reading

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx =)
glade ya like

Death words
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if i was that chick i would wait till the guy sleeps and take all my shit and leave

Posted: Dec 20, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL =) me to ...but you'll find out way she hasnt



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