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Novel By: Nats
Fantasy


Zonica was found wondering the streets late at night by the Corven family when she was only six she had no memory of way she was ther or how she got ther, the only thing she now was her name coz it was on a small gold chane that hung from her neck .

The family took her in and adopted her.
Thay were a welthy family and liked tredition
One of ther traditions were arange marriges so if she liked it or not she is part of the family now
When she turnd 19 she was considerd a woman and old anough to get maried.
So as you can gess bevore she new it she was infront of the alter standing infront of a man some wat in his twentys he took her hand and smiled at her he had a black tux on and his hair was jeld up the colour of his hair was a durty blond colour that complemented his face perfectly, he had baby blue eyes that sparkeld as if he just won the jackpot or something.
The wedding was perfect, every little girls fairytale

Now that her new live began with her new husbadn, there is choises that needs to be made but will it be the write onece …
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Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 127    Comments: 9    Likes: 1   


Chapter 4
 
When Zonica finaly got home she put the car back in the garage and closed it. Then she ran; half limping to the front door and opened it and carefuly made her way inside, not wanting to make any noice closed the door slowly and softly then she slowly makes her way to the kitchen to start with Brian’s breakfast but before she could take at least more than four or five steps, a deep voice broke the silence.
Zonica flinched by the voice, she knew who it was and was hoped that he was still asleep by the time she got home.
 
“So where have you been”Brian’s voice echoed through the halls
 
Zonica looked around in the dark to see where his voice came from but could not see anything around her she sighed and took another few steps forward hoping it was just her imagination or her mind playing tricks on her like it always does.
 
“Zonica”! His voice came again and a hand grabed her shoulder from behind, spinning her around to face him she flinched and wimperd in his grip.
 
“I asked you a question and you better answer it if you know what is good for you” he half yeld in her face.
She looked up into his eyes his face only a few inches away and anger written all over it; her body started to shake, she knows that he will have a fit if he knew where she was.
 
“I…I…Um well… I was by the drug store to get some bandages” she said with a shacking voice and tears filling in the corners of her eyes knowing that lieing is one of the things she can’t do.
 
“Don’t lie to me Zonica; you were not by a drug store” he growled at her and hit her thru the face pushing her against the wall blocking off some of her air supply
 
Zonica looked at him with fear in her eyes she closed them knowing that she has no choice but to tell him and just take whats coming to her and get it over with.
She took a deep breath and opened her eyes staring him straight in the eyes “I went to the Hospital to get some medication” she said not trying to sound scared but her voice failed her
 
“Medication!! … Medication for what, for you, HA, now who would want to waist there time on a pathetic littile human like you” he replyde pushing her aside and she fell to the flore.”HA! Look at you”He said kicking one of her legs out of his way and walked pass her
 
“If I am so pathetic then way do you sit up with me”she mumbeld to herself but loude enough for him to hear.
 
He turned around hitting her through the face with the back of his hand and some blood came out her mouth and ran down her chin.
 
“What did you just say” he asked with anger rising in his voice staring at her till she answerd
Zonica didn’t repleid just cept on looking at the floor.
“What did you say!!?” He asked again with more anger and irritation in his voice
 
“Nothing” She answerd wiping away the blood that’s running down her chin.
 
He came closer and picked her up by her hair so she was standing infront of him, pushing her head back so that he can look her in the eyes.
 
“Why I put up with you is my business and soon all will be reveald and then you’ll beg me to end it all … but untill then your just a porn in this game” he said with an amused smirk on his face and he let go of her hair and she dropped down to the floor with a wimper a few tears escaped her eyes. He looked at her and shoke his head and said “you’re pathetic” and kicked her in the side where her hand is supporting  her and she lost the strength to keep her up and laid down on the cold tiles seeing spots in her vision.
She knows that the pain medication will wear off soon and the now new bruizes ontop of her older bruizes is going to be brutal and she knows that she cant just lay there for Brian will come bach and who knows what he will do if she was still laying there so she takes in a deep breath and slowly and carefully she forced herself to stand up and head to the kitchen.
With all the pain returning and now entering her body like daggers she ignores it as best as she can and started with Brian’s breakfast.
With her moving around so much isnt helping with the pain.Her body growing weaker and her legs threatning to give way, she takes a few breaths and tries to grab hold of anything to keep herself up but fell forward and hit Brians cup of coffy out of his hand and it messed all over him and the cup fell to the ground and broke into pices, scattering every direction all over the kitchen floor.
Before she knew what was happening she felt her body hit the wall and she slidto the ground with no air and her vision almost darkening she could make out Brians figure infront of her but couldn’t hear anything he is saying, she just sat there looking in his derection and then his fist hit her face and the darkness took over.


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Comments:

he is so oooh u know wat i'm gonna get my chichuaha on him to leave a nasty stain on his pants lol but yea post soon plzzzz

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL !!!
I know wat ya saying

UGH! HE'S SUCH A ...!

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Scary man *runs away yelling*please tell me when you update

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

please update soon!!

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

gosh...i hate him.....youre such a good writer, i can really feel her pain :(

let me know when you update!!!

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

aaaggghhh!..
he sooo
i mean.. lyk..
sooo..

uugghh!!!
well u kno!!..

but nehoo.. wow i lov this story.. nd ur reali skilled, your detailing is fantastic..
keep it up hun!..
=D

Posted: Sep 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx very much for your comment
i hope you enjoy reading the rest of the novel

ugh..... *growls*

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL

you inspire your reader to feel . shows how good this is .

Posted: Nov 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Awe ... thanx
Glad i did something right =)
Thanx for reading and the comment

(Just take your time reading =) its gonna take me a few weeks to update again coz i just became a mom on Nov 22 and taking some time to get use to having a baby around)

will keep ya posted

Death words
(not registered user)

it just keeps on getting better

Posted: Dec 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx =)
glade ya like it



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