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This piece is a poem cum talk between two people..try to guess what are they talking about.. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 Reads: 156 Comments: 6 Likes: 0
· Something’s strange in it, no?
o Yes, I guessed so!
· What do you think it could be?
o Go check yourself! Why ask me?
· Does that mean you’re scared?
o Now that’s a news bizarre!
· Look, whatever it is, it’s shining!
o It’s something like tears from the eyes of a baby whining.
· Hey! It is a baby!
o And that big thing beside him is his mother maybe!
· How strange! She’s smiling at her whining baby’s sight.
o No, idiot! She’s putting him to bed. It’s night.
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WoW...This is VERY interesting! Great Job!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Oh thats just great. Now I'll be bothered with this till I figure out what it is. Thanks. Thanks a lot. ;)
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
wow. cool! anyways, comment to me if im right: fish, The sun and moon, the earth and moon or a mother and son. thx! great job!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
Whoa!! That's so crazy! I love it. hahaa.
Dani.
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
I am sooo confused!!!!! ?_?
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
This poem is awesome! it made me smile :) Ive written one about two people talking, its called one more thing, Love to hear your thoughts on it!
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
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