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A crushed Soul

Poem By: xoPaigexo
Humor


Tags: soul, crushed

Ok... This wasn't written by me!!! It was written by one of my friends Heidi!!

We get quite bored in study hall hehehe View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 18, 2008    Reads: 92    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


My soul was crushed,

Just like the charcoal toast I made this morning.

A pile of pitch black dust is all that's left.

 

My sould was crushed,

Just like the rib-cage of the carcase on the side of the road.

Smashed and ground into the asphalt.

 

My soul was crushed,

Just like the windshield of a car that experienced a head-on collision.

Shattered into a million itty-bitty pieces.

 

My soul was crushed,

Just like the bones in the guys nose i broke yesterday.

Broken and crooked as hell.

 

my soul was CRUSHED!!


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I like your poem!! leave me an comment some time.

Posted: Jan 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. My friend Heidi actually wrote that in study hall. I'll be sure to tell her that less than five minutes after i put it up someone commented!!!
I'll be sure to comment you!!!!!

THANKS FOR READING!!



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