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Heartbrak Closure ( response to another of Poison Passion's challenge)

By: KitKat123
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Alright, this challenge was a great one! The challenge was to write a letter about a heartbreak we've had. It's to the person that broke your heart and it's supposed to give you closure. This is to a letter to a guy I recently liked that broke my heart in a terrible way. This challenge has given me a little bit more closure then I had. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 16, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


( Names are changed to protect others' identity)

Dear Jared,

I just wanted to write this to tell you what a JERK you truely are. You said you liked me and I liked you back. And so I waited for you expecting you to, I don't know, ask me out!  But boy was I wrong. So, we go on summer vacation and I'm on a trip out of state for two weeks. I didn't have my phone and, thus, couldn't talk to you or anyone for that matter. When I finnaly get back and call you, I find out that you've been 6 way calling people. I joined the phone fun one night and recognized the normal voices of the people you socialize with. Then I hear my BFF Melanie on the phone to. So I was like, cool you guys became friends. Well, 1 week later I go to Jane's house, and Christy and Rachel are there to. We get to talking and Rachel and I brought up the 6 way calling. I told her to give me all the details on what happened the 2 weeks i wasn't on the call. Then, I got the news. She told me that you said you totally love Melanie and if she'd go out with you. Your dirty little secret. So I'm gone for 2 weeks and I'm already nothing to you?! And worse, you couldn't be a man and tell me yourself, oh no. I had to hear it from my best friend who didn't even know I liked you. It took all my strenght to not cry on the spot. You BASTARD!! Well you know what? I'm not interested in you, and no longer will tears fall from my eyes over you. You could've dated me. I would've been the best damn girlfriend, but you never gave me that chance. And, I know I can't control who you like, but you could've sucked it up and told me yourself that you liked someone else. Well, this letter is to tell you goodluck with whoever because you just lost the whole package. I have so many more options that your sleezeball face won't even cross my mind. Goodbye!

The girl you'll regret you lost,

KitKat123 ( didn't want to write my real name )


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Comments:

oh wow, great job!! totally what the challenge is meant to do: let you get all your rage out at the person and give you closure, help you gain control of your life and emotions so you can move on. And there will be better guys than 'jared', trust me. ive been through something of the sorts, and ive met much better guys. so stay strong, and dont sweat over a guy that's too chicken, kay? great letter!!
~Poison Passion

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment and the support!

yes there will be better ones like Jard....u indeed know how to heal ur own wound...MAY GOD GUIDE AND BLESS YOU ALWAYS TO DO THIS...

ALL OUR GOOD WISHES ARE ALWAYS THERE WITH YOU...

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks you! You are the greatest! So supportive. Thanks for the comment and your blessing and wishes will guide me through. Thanks.

i came back to read again...this is really heartfelt and touches us somewhere deep within....u sure knowhow to express ur emotions....

keep writing buddy....GOD helps those who SEEK it...and U will WIN in the end...

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Gosh thank you soooooo much! I'm glad you read it again and it touches your heart. Thank you for the beautiful comment I really appreciate it! I'll keep writing for sure! :P



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