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Clouded Mind

Poem By: Adam Phoenix
Poetry


Tags: despair

I wrote this when I was going through a dark depression. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 13, 2008    Reads: 39    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


What happens to you when you don’t continue down the path?

Or if you can’t find the pieces of the puzzle?

For when despair takes hold,

How can I see through it?

For my eyes are gone.


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Comments:

Very nice!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

thx

I like this one. very good.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thankyou.

This poem just left a mystery in my head; i like it! I was wondering, why are your eyes gone??
Hmmm. . . . .thinking***

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thx, but is eyes aren't gone, he just can't see out of them.



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