What happens to you when you don’t continue down the path?
Or if you can’t find the pieces of the puzzle?
For when despair takes hold,
How can I see through it?
For my eyes are gone.

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Submitted: Aug 13, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
What happens to you when you don’t continue down the path?
Or if you can’t find the pieces of the puzzle?
For when despair takes hold,
How can I see through it?
For my eyes are gone.
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Very nice!
Posted: Aug 13, 2008
I like this one. very good.
Posted: Aug 22, 2008
This poem just left a mystery in my head; i like it! I was wondering, why are your eyes gone??
Hmmm. . . . .thinking***
Posted: Sep 29, 2008
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