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Metamorphoses

Poem By: Adam Phoenix
Poetry


Here are common questions we all ask as we go through changes in our life. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 27, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


The world is changing, I can feel it. I can see the transformation that affects me. Sometimes I feel stronger and joyful, yet others I become confused, trapped in a foreign world. Why do I feel this way? I thought I would become better but keep the things thatI want; so then, why are the things that Icare for the mostslip through my fingers? I have been chased into a cocoon, but what will I be when I come out? Will I be one that others look up to, or will I be a monster that has lost everything? How do I pick up the threads that I’ve lost, or bind the things I cherish? For the things that change the innocent caterpillar are strange. Where will the metamorphoses take me? How will I change? Well . . . I guess, all I can do is trust in the Lord, for he will lead me on the right path. So the question is, who will I become?


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I like poems when they're in stanzas, it just sets a group to read with. . . .but above it all, i liked it! Very brilliant!

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

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thx

Nice.. lately I've found myself asking these exact questions.. I liked how you put it all together. Lovely job! :)

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

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thx

You will first notice and care more when things you like disappear or change. Those things you don't care about, you will not see them.

Nice work. I liked it.

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

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thx

I am sure God wil guide you all through the way. Thoughtful.

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

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Thanks

If you don't know where you're going with your life, you can always stop, focus on the things you want most, and have faith. I think I know now what people ask when they undergo change. What a good poem.

Posted: Jan 3, 2009

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thx



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