Savin’ You
Falling, falling, that’s all I see
“Hurry, I’m fallin’ ”
I’m drawn to catch you,
But am bound by my own four walls
I’m trying to say something, but nothing is coming
As you, my emblem, falls
“Hurry I’m Fallin’ “
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This is a response for Hugs and Kisses challenge.
Song: Savin' Me by Nickelback
Words:
1.Drawn
2.Bound
3.Emblem
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Submitted: Jul 2, 2008 Reads: 52 Comments: 4 Likes: 4
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Omg that's really good ^.^ It's short and good and you totally see the song in the poem. But I noticed a typo: you wrote "as yo" and I think you mean as "you" or SOMETHING that isn't yo. That's all.
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
Amazing girl! you put so much hard work into this!
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
hi! angel. u've met the challenge word for word. keep it up. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 9, 2008
I probably heard diz song from Nickelback. Juzt never paid diz close to da lyrics. Anyway, diz iz godd!!
Posted: Dec 6, 2008
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