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I moved on

Poem By: anusha
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 151    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


I was on a path..,
when I realised finally..
I am stuck in sand,
where not even air is an ally..
I woke upto a world..
which was dead,
blissfully unware..
by zombies it was led..
I didnt care..
about the things gone..
I closed my eyes..
and I Chose to move on..

Everywhere I went.
I saw intentions so vice..
solemnly disguised, they were..
paradoxes to actions so nice..
Never did I ..
had a courage to try
to kill or pounce upon..
I closed my eyes..
And I Chose to move on..

Friendships and break ups..
I had seen them all..
rising like the Flames..
and having a mighty fall.
I could have saved..
perhaps, one or two..
but didnt fell the
urge to do.
I didnt wait for the dawn..
I closed my eyes..
and i Chose to move on..

Looking back, I know..
My mistakes and flaws..
I know if ..
I had taken a pause..
I know , had I
gone against the tides..
I know, had I,
opened my eyes wide..
I know, had I
thought just once..
I know, had I
lifted my guns..

I wouldnt be ..
what I am now..
dunno, if I was wise... when
I closed my eyes..
and I chose to move on


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Comments:

^_^ I tend to think that in whatever we do or have done, as long as at this moment 'now' we are 'awake' and aware, then good comes. as long as we are ok with the past as it is our friend, no matter how dramatic or sad or dissapointed in our selves we are, we are only but small egos in a mind shaft Lol so to speak, er, until we wake up....so,,, why don't I wake up??? lol!!

I very much like the way this is expressed, you come across very easily for me to read. ^_^
~katie

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

This was a very unique poem, and speaks of truth. Hindsight is 20/20 but I think everyday of actions I could have done, and wondered just where I'd be had I done it.

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

u ve actually out the entire poem in jst one sentence! thank you!

Ahh, this is full of self-reflection. I've got to believe the choices I made in the past were made for a reason, and I'm sure the same is true for you. Nice job! It made me think too.

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

yup, u got that perfectly right! thanx for ur comments :)

i liked the way you've put your words in...good job :)

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thnx a ton ^_^

hmm

Posted: Oct 8, 2008



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