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Retaining Blood

Poem By: cantlive4evr
Poetry


Retain is like contain right? Lol. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 10, 2008    Reads: 105    Comments: 4    Likes: 0   


I'm retaining blood,
Underneath my skin.
It bubbles up,
And barely stays in.

I'm retaining blood,
To stay alive.
I'm retaining blood,
So I won't shrink in size.

I'm retaining blood,
So I can breathe.
I'm retaining blood,
And the day I seize.

I'm retaining blood,
So I can think.
I'm retaining blood,
So my mind won't sink.

I'm retaining blood,
Because I can.
I'm retaiing blood,
So I can tan.

I'm retaining blood,
Just for you.
I'm retaining blood,
And I want to.

I'm retaining blood,
Without a doubt.
I'm retaining blood,
Afraid to shout.

I'm retaining blood,
So my clothes won't stain.
I'm retaining blood,
So it won't wash away in the rain.


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Comments:

hmmmm very interesting blood= life pretty much so yeah thats good ^_^

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :} ^.^

Hey. At least you're RETAINING it, right?

Posted: Aug 11, 2008

Author Comment:

haha Yep!

lol, I thought of vampires the whole time. *shrugs sholders* weird me!

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

lol.

this is really good!!!! i mean...wow!

+Hecate+

Posted: Sep 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Heh thanks :D



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