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A Twisted Reality

Poem By: Courtnee25
Poetry


A poem I write about what makes a person, a great person. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 25, 2008    Reads: 64    Comments: 7    Likes: 3   


                            A Twisted Reality

What is a good person?

The perfect smile,

A pretty face,

The one who can tie the perfect knot,

Or fly into outer space,

Someone who built rocket ships,

Who invented ‘potato chips’,

Someone who models clothing,

Who wrote famous novels?

Who became famous models,

 

What is a good citizen?

Someone who plants a tree,

Who fills the world with glee?

Who recycles,

Who donates,

Someone who helps an old woman across the street,

Or can dance to every beat,

Someone who can talk a storm,

And uses it to warn,

Warn us of the furiousity,

Awaiting our neglect,

Of our Earth,

Our planet,

OUR HOME!

Someone who can walk miles,

Someone who can wait,

Can you wait a while?

 

Are you a good citizen?

If you could change the world,

Would you change the poverty?

The loss of people’s property,

Would you bring back the forests?

Would you care before us?

Love one before yourself,

Learn that beauty is not that of a reflection,

But of the things they do,

To change for me and you,

 

Now answer honestly.


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Comments:

This i think is best left unanswered, if i am to judge myself as being a better person, i will not do more

and i really like that you threw in assumptions and not answer directly who would be a better person, cuz the answers will vary

good piece

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

wow, thanx

This is my favorite of ur poems so far. Great job!

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks alot! lol

I agree with jerkulez

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks everyone for the feedback so far.

i love how you dont really say what a good person is because no one is perfect and no one can be even if they wanted to and to some people a good person will be different and people see in different ways soooo really good poem i love it

Posted: Oct 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks lol

well i see your writing is still boring, pitty..................Lucien Remeese, miss me

Posted: Oct 23, 2008

Author Comment:

omg! your back!

Very well said. I gave it an I like it mark.

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

Ignore perversion, (a.k.a.) Lucien! He bothered me too! And how did he get back anyways? Well great poem, its one of my fav.s! :D I like how you do not say who the good person would be! Bc its true the answers will vary! I give you an I likey!

Posted: Oct 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks...again! lmao! And I have been ignoring him...thanks! Has he been bother ing you lately?



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