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NOTHING OF LOVE

Poem By: dadio
Poetry


Tags: poem, date, rape

A GIRL'S ILLFATED DATE. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008    Reads: 84    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


It wasn’t supposed
To have gone that far,
The whole thing got out

Of hand, she thought it
Was just a bit of
Fun, just a small laugh

After a few drinks,
A bit of a lark;
But he saw it so

Differently, from a
Different view, he
Knew what he wanted,

What he wanted to
Do. She was out of
Her depth, out of her

League, wanting now her
Mother, wanting her
Home, feeling his wild

Passion, sensing her
Shame, wishing he’d stop
Before he began,

Wanting no part of
This ravaging man.
All was soon over,

The bright moon above,
Plenty of passion,
But nothing of love.


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Comments:

i like the rhyming, i like the last two lines mostly it actually makes sense, and its different cause when people think of love they always think passion. Would love it if you commented on my novel

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you.

I am not big on poetry but I like the way you wrote it. This is a very thought provoking poem.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you



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