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Poem By: kami
Poetry


Tags: poetry, different

Everyone knows how the world works, everyone wants to be pertique, alike. Then there is us the ones who enjoy being different. Knowing that when you walk down the street, you won't see a twin of you. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 22, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


Those bright blues make nothing more then your eyes,

The peach is just your skin,

Do this mean you are special?

Red is the soft leather you kiss with,

Brown is the silk mane.

You mise well be plastic,

because I know you’re not real,

nothing more then an ugly canvas,

painted with pretty paints,

The easel is getting cold,
are you ever coming back,

Who cares if you do?

You can simply be remade

A couple strokes as simple as that

Do you have that trademark?

The one that shows your dear friends,

You got to be them,

There is no other response

You mise well be plastic,

Because I know you’re not real

Nothing more then an ugly canvas

Painted with pretty paints

The easel is getting cold

I hope you never come back

Stay painted

Don’t come back clean

I know you won’t be able to change


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Comments:

WONDERFUL! That is extremely good! I can't wait to read some more of your writing, please let me know when more is posted! =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

AWESOME!!!i totally agree with Maple
this rocks!!!
let me know when you post more
xoxo
DOM!!!

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

wow, really good, i loved it, keep writing,

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

i know a good poem when i dont really understand whats going on...

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

That was very interesting.
I love how you've connected everything.
Good stuff.

Posted: Jul 23, 2008



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