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Dedicated to my Love

Poem By: Michael68
Poetry


Something that I wrote for that special woman in my life. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


She stands out on yonder balcony longing for bliss,

Miles away her lover is from her touch.

Her lips longing to feel his tender kiss,

The one thing that she yearns for so much.

Heavy woe dost a her heart endure,

While her eyes slowly sheds a tear.

The love for him is pure and true,

Making everything she wants so clear.

Heavy passion locked within her heart,

Wanting him near to express him her love.

Wanting the passion between them to start,

To express the tenderness given from above.

Such wantonness burns between her thighs,

But now her heart with loneliness sighs.

Her mind does wander down the path of dreams,

Where there her love does wait with open arms.

Together the world troubles disappears it seems,

As they are enveloped within each others charms.

Kisses so passionate and deep,

While their limbs and hearts entwine.

This moment in their memory they shall keep,

And of this special love that is so refine.

Bodies joined as one in love’s desire,

Blessed by all the feelings they do endow.

Flesh melting to one from passion’s fire,

Two hearts beating for one body now.

Never does she want to let him go,

To continue forever to let their love show.

This maiden does awaken alone in her empty bed,

Longing even more now for his kiss, his touch.

The image of him stays within her head,

As her heart yearns for his love so much.

She walks to the window staring out into the cold night,

Sighs of such hunger for his desire comes over her.

Wanting her kiss to make her heart take flight,

And the reality around her becomes a blur.

It is then she sees him emerging from the shadows of the eve,

His words of love spoken with such passion.

Each word and feeling she knows to believe,

For he courts her in such honorable fashion.

He says I love you with all my heart,

And now she knows they will never be apart.


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Comments:

hi! mikey. ur love is gushing through this poem. and there r all the indications they'll live happily ever after. long live juliet and long live u to love and to write such lovely poems. carry on. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, Thank you Bubbly. That it the sweetest comment that I have gotten so far on here. God Bless you. :)

Michael, This poem made me think so much. It's kind of like the thing I heard the other day 'you never know how good you have it until you lose it' and this poem had a reverse ending that put together all your Romeo and Juliet Stores, Poems and pieces on this website that I have viewed. I really do believe this is your best yet, and to wrap it all up you had the romance tangled into this whole poem. Great work

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks alot I am glad that you enjoyed my work. :)

juliet
(not registered user)

he is good, isn't he? I swear he gets better and better with everything I read!
i think this is my favorite so far, Mike.
and hey, I'm a fan too! I might as well let everyone know what I think of it too! :)
lol

i love you

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you my Juliet. Without you these words would never have some forth

WOW! GOOD JOB!

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. I appreciate it.:)



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