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what will you give up for me? and what will i give up for you? View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 15, 2007 Reads: 33 Comments: 1 Likes: 1
I don’t want to take
What you don’t want to give
But I can’t help wishing
You wanted to give more
Not because I would
Enjoy the receiving
But because you
Took pleasure in the giving
How can I explain?
My tortured wants!
To ask would be
To ruin the gift
And not to receive
Is a sorrow.
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Nicely put Rauna!
Giving is tarnished if it is not done willingly..
I get the message. It's a good one.
Posted: Jan 13, 2008
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