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Poem By: rauna
Poetry

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Submitted: Aug 15, 2007 Reads: 33 Comments: 2 Likes: 0

Seasons changing

Imperceptible shifts

Slowly the winds of change

Are moving across my heart

Old things still glow

With the embers of love and memory

Burnished gold, autumn’s bounty

New love blossoms, exultant and fresh

Growing pains twisting

With satisfying reality

Spring is coming,

Bringing the sweet sorrow

That snowflakes won’t fall

On my eyelashes anymore.

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Comments:

rauna:

Well written.

You may want to reformat the printed lines to improve the presentation and make it more appealing to the eye of the reader. To accomplish this you will have to work with the "edit" function in your own Booksie Publishing Center. You may have to re-key this using Booksie software instead of copying from the software you may be using on your work-station.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Aug 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks for the encouragement, Ed.
I have gone through and re-formatted all my uploads, was a bit painful! :)
It's nice to see them all in one place though!

S Nayar

This one is beautiful and very well written - sad yet so full of hope. One of my favourites! SN

Posted: Aug 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Awww thanks SN :) I like this one too because it encapsulates for me the good and bad parts of any change... and how you can appreciate beauty in both!