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sorrowing

Poem By: rauna
Poetry


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Submitted: Aug 15, 2007    Reads: 39    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Tears inside

Bitterness speaks

so ugly within me

But have I seen the deep

Is this the end

Or just a rough patch between?

When will I surface

Is there even anything to see?

Lost and bereft

Like something is torn inside of me

But maybe it has to rip

Before it can heal.

 

 


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You're breaking my heart girl! This is beautiful. Keep on writing.
SN

Posted: Aug 16, 2007

Maybe it has to rip, Before it has to heal...so profound that it contains the very soul of suffering... and triumph :)

Posted: Aug 16, 2007

Author Comment:

it's still painful - because when it's ripping you don't have a sense for how it will heal. and often the method of healing is in itself frightening!



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