Broken
Im broken
Can't move
Can't feel a thing
So numb
So helpless
I feel like a dying animal
Falling to pieces
So broken
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Submitted: Aug 28, 2008 Reads: 24 Comments: 3 Likes: 0
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Caught that vibe
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
Nicely written, I like the emotion that you put into it. Well done!
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
wow, that was great. i love your poems, you forgo fancy lines for simple but strong and powerful words.
this was very beautiful and intense at the same time. well done human earth monkey, well done.
Posted: Sep 18, 2008
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