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Poem By: xxstuckinfantesyxx
Poetry


Another poem i wrote. It needs a title though, and im not quit sure what to give it. Anyone have suggestions? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 30    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Stars twinkle oh-so bright, in the night.

They shimmer and glow,

never to go.

They dance and twirl to share there light,

on this lovely night.

Hints of magic,

Some are tragic.

There tropical glow,

wow dosnt this flow?

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Jennaeve.


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Comments:

Yes it does flow. The rhythm is very good. Of course, this comes from a non-poet. ;D

A title could be
Fluid Sky
Star Dance
Dance of the Stars
..........


Something.

I have trouble naming things too.

Many good thoughts to you,
Javelin

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much :)
and soon you fill find the poet part of you! im already starting to! See? haha that ryhmed.
Thanks a bucnh, and i like the title Fluid Sky, i think il use that. Thanks! (:

Yah! Fluid sky is a good title!
O...This was good by the way!

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe thanks :)



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