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Becoming her Prince in Shining Armor

Novel By: CheetahBear
Romance


James Hadden is used to being the popular guy that everyone falls for, but then he falls for Skylar Pylant and she can't stand him, he finds out that she is a sucker for romance and decides that to win her over he will have to become her Prince in Shining Armor! View table of contents...

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Submitted: Oct 25, 2008    Reads: 848    Comments: 30    Likes: 3   


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Once upon a time in a far away kingdom....

No no no

Once upon a time in a land far far away....

Nah, still not right.

Once upon a time there lived a boy named James Hadden.

Thats better.

Anyways...


Once upon a time there lived a boy named James Alexander Hadden, and he was 17 years old.

He was in his junior year at Silverstone High School.

And he was the hottest guy in the whole school.

Every girl fell for him but one.

One girl!

And guess what!


That one girl that didn't fall for him he was in love with!

Ok so maybe he was just in love with her body but still, he felt different towards her then all the other girls in the school and her name was Skylar Renee Pylant.

She is just so amazing in every way possible.

She has the body of a fricken model, the smile of an angel and the lips of a godess.


I...I mean he just wants her to give him the chance to fricken talk to her where he can throw in a couple of pick up lines and then BOOM have her under his spell.

I walked into the hallway and slammed into someone.

I looked down at the girl now scrambling to pick up her books. "Watch where you're going Bryant!" I said walking by.

"Hey!" I heard an annoyed/furious voice say, just before someone grabbed my shoulder.

I turned around to find myself facing Payton Wilson, the quarterback of Silverstones varsity football team and also one of my competitors in most popular.

"You gotta problem?" I asked him.

"Yeah, you just knocked my girl over and then disrespected her" Payton said not letting go of my shoulder.

I snorted as I looked at Catalyn Bryant now standing behind Payton hugging her books to her chest. "S'rry Bryant" I said and then I smirked at Payton. "Better?" I asked.

"Yeah" he said. He let go of my shoulder and walked back to Catalyn.

The boy was so wipped. He had been going out with Catalyn since early in our Sophmore year. He had won her over by catching her when she fell from the second story at the homecoming dance. I guess you could say that he was her "Prince Charming". Me on the other hand it was just get a girl, get what I wanted from her and let her go.

Just then Skylar Pylant herself walked by me and made her way over to Catalyn and Payton. I saw her stop. "Cinderella, Prince Charming, how are you this fine morning?" she asked them with a smile.

I couldn't help but smile as I heard her voice.


I felt different for her then I did any other girl. I had the crazy thought that if I ever got her I might actually want to try and keep her around for a little while longer.

"We're doing good, having some problems with the normal jerks-" Catalyn shot a look over at me. "But other than that we're good. What about you?" she finished as she turned her attention back to Skylar.

Skylar shot me a mean look too. "Jocks get on my nerves, oh except for you of course Payton" she smiled not even trying to keep her voice down. "I am doing great, thanks for asking" she said.

Payton nodded at her and my blood boiled.

I was so angry that I missed where the conversation was going and when I tuned back in I was just in time to hear Skylar reply "I wish I could find my Prince Charming, I'm so clumsy I need one of them around" she was saying.

Hmmm.

"Find a Knight in Shining Armor, they are much better" Catalyn said smiling and knocking on Payton's shoulder like he was wearing armor.

Payton smiled and pecked her quickly on the cheek. "I don't know how Catalyn made it so long without me. Anytime I turn around and she is in trouble. I think she does it on purpose just so I have to catch her" he said winking.

"Of course" Catalyn replied smiling widely at him.

"Well if you happen to run into any Knights or Prince Charmings then do give them my number" Skylar said as she watched them with longing in her wonderful blue eyes.

Then it came to me.

In order to get Skylar Pylant I would have to become a Prince in Shining Armor!


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Comments:

ogm i am absolutely loving this cheetahbear!!!!! it's sooo awesome and i love love love the way u brought catalyn and payton back into the story!!! they r my fave characters of yours!! lol and i love the beginning, how u start it out with him not knowing how to start it. already im addicted!! keep me updated!!

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you are loving it!!! And yeah I figure that everyone would be wanting more of Catalyn and Payton so I knew that I just had to put them in here! and yeah starting a story has always been hard for me so I decided to start it by making the main guy not knowing how to start his own story!!! I am glad that you are already addicted!! And I will :)

Haha Catilyn and Payton are in this story!!!!!!! Awesome beginning, Skylar seems like a pretty cool girl. Is James gonna be her Prince in Shining Armor? I can already tell this is gonna be another good story.

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much and yeah I kinda threw them in there for everyone to know they are still doing good in junior year! :) and yeah Skyler is a pretty cool girl! :D and who knows maybe he will become her Prince in Shining Armor!!! I'm glad that you think it will be another good story and I sure hope that it will be!!!

aweee more pweeeese =]

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

More will be up soon! Thanks for reading!!!

lol there in this story that guy sounds like a jerk! LOL hope he changes

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hmm...maybe he will...or maybe i'm just making you think that more than likely he will and he doesn't..hmm you never know :/

we love it!!!!!! all three of us do!!!!!! yay. so happy to see the Cinderella characters back!!!!!! more to their story. awwwwww more please! cant wait! i like how he says Payton is whipped when he probably will end up the same.lol some guys... they just make you laugh! his ego is so big and hes such a jerk i am gonna love seeing him fall. i find it priceless. specially when they fall hard and no ones there to catch them (at least in the beginning cause after a wile they just gotta love each other) anxious for more!

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad that you love it!!! And yeah I figured everyone would be happy to see the Cinderella characters back and more will be up soon! And yeah most guys have such big egos and the girl doesn't like them and then they end up liking them anyways...I know its kinda unoriginal but I try to make it funny!!!

chante baxer
(not registered user)

Price in shing armor
Very diffrent
No joke
NOT sarcasm
Update soon

Posted: Oct 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Well i wanted it to be different :D tehe!! more will be up soon!!!

Eek!
JERK, he is such a jerk,
YAY Payton *Gasps*

This is so so good, Update soon
plz (:


Chumb

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! And yeah I thought you might want to see Payton again! And yeah he is a jerk! and more will be up soon!!!

awww...i loved the cinderella story and the characters glad to see them back...and i hope cinderella's bff gets the sweet end of this w/ james

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad that so many people loved Stealing the Cinderella Story and I hope that I don't disappoint anyone with this one!!! And lets see if I can get anyone going with this one :)

Aw this is so brilliant! Catalyn and Payton are still going good :D yay !! I think this sounds pretty awesome... I love James and Skylar! Already!

Let me know when you update!

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! And yay to Catalyn and Payton!!! :) :D and I hope that you will still like it later, this is not going to be an easy task for James :) And of course I will :)

It's REALLY good. =D i think i recognize those names...I THINK.

+Hecate+

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D and of coures you reconize the names :D

omg i luv this already!!!! cant wait for more!!! omg and yay more catalyn and payton!!!! my faves!!!

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay! Glad that you love it already! More will be up soon! Yay to more Catalyn and Payton...I think they were everybodys favs...they are some of my favorites to though :D

ahhh this is great!! love it already!! can't wait to see what kind of wild stuff he does!!

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear and yeah he is gonna do a bunch of wild stuff :D tehe

i love the opening lines! brilliant ;) cant wait to see how this develops! please let me know when you update!

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much and will do!!!

pleez update soon it amazes me that n e story u write i like lol :)

Posted: Oct 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Well i'm glad that you like my stories!

Kathy
(not registered user)

Hey Cheetahbear!
Thanks for advising me to read this story/novel!
I loved it so far :D

Update soon please!

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Your welcome! I'm glad that you like it! More will be up soon!

Angel in the night.
(not registered user)

Hey i am not familiar with those two characters. Can u tell me who they are

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Well the characters that I meant you might reconize are really Payton and Catalyn, they are the main characters from Stealing the Cinderella Story, so if you haven't read that then you won't reconize anyone in this story!

beatrice;)
(not registered user)

hahahahaha,,, i love it;) prince in shining armor sounds so cuuute,,,,

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks,,,and yeah I thought I would mix it up a bit :D

Great

Posted: Oct 27, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

hey i like it i think its gonna gt really cute,... waitin 4more!!!!!!! keep me posted

Posted: Oct 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! More will be up soon! Thanks for reading!

Rat
(not registered user)

i didnt feel like longing in (btw this is rat) but i love it update soon plez

Posted: Oct 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! Glad that you like it Rat!

Already love it. I like how this isn't the same characters, but it still has reference to Stealing The Cinderella Story. Nice job :]

Posted: Oct 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much and yeah I thought it would be better that way :D

OMG!!! That was a great start!! It grasped my attention and made me want to read more!!! :-)
James seems like a jerk in this chapter But I'M sure skylar will be the one to change him into the PERFECT gentleman :-) I'm off to read the next chapter! :-)
*I LOVE IT ALREADY!!!*

Posted: Oct 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Omg!!! Thanks so much!!! I'm really honored that it actually got your attention! Thank you so much once again and yeah maybe Skylar can turn him around into a perfect gentleman! Hope you enjoy the story further on :)

Great start CheetahBear!!
Straight to the next chapter!!XD

Posted: Nov 1, 2008

Author Comment:

:D thanks!!! Glad that you liked it!

Ya think, Joseph. I mean, that's not the title or anything. Great as always!
-peace

Posted: Nov 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha...thanks!

dood dood the first was ah may zee ing. way too ah may zee ing for my brain.

Posted: Nov 8, 2008

Author Comment:

tehe wow thanks!

Great start! Keep it up!

Posted: Nov 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!!! Will do!

I adored Country Boy, City Girl and this is going to much the same way!

Posted: Nov 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that you liked Country Boy, City girl, and i'm glad that you're liking this one as well!

oooooo wonder what hes going to doooo..great chappie...or novel i should say, yup another one (typical! HMph...lol)
ooo PAyton and Catlyn!!!! arghh im so excited!

Posted: Nov 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha why thank ya very muchly!!! :D And yeah Payton and Catalyn aren't always mentioned very much, but every once in a while they are :D I'm glad that you like it so far!

omg! i love it! im definetly adding this to my reading list!!!!:) -georgiapeaches

Posted: Nov 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! Glad that you liked it!!! :D

LOL! I was smiling the whole time reading this chapter! Catalyn and Payton~~~ I love them! XD Good idea bringing them back! ^^ Prince in shining armor! Original? XD

Posted: Dec 3, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad that I brought a smile to your face :) And yeah I love Catalyn and Payton to :) And yep, Prince Charming, and Knight in Shining Armor is just plain, so Prince in Shining Armor :D



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