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Love Endures

Poem By: Adam Phoenix
Romance


Love conquers all, even death! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 13, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


A handsome prince,

A beautiful maiden,

In a magnificent kingdom,

Do they lie,

For years ago,

They both loved,

When she screamed,

He would be her rescuer,

When she cried,

He would be her mourner,

For as he slew both beast and fowl,

An unseen enemy came towards the bow,

One night, when he was old and gray,

It stole his breath upon the place which he lay,

She found him next morn,

With tears in her eyes,

And pressed her lips against his,

Just one last time,

At his funeral she wept,

But despair consumed,

She fell in the pit,

And dirt overtook,

Each year passes, their corpses rot,

But their love ever grows,

For even death cannot stop its one true foe.


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Comments:

Good Job! Did you intentionally spell wept as wepped and upon as apon? I knew what you were saying, unfortunately though, I am anal when it comes to spelling--one of my character defects. Anyway, you are expanding your range and for this you should be proud!!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you liked it, and thanks for the spelling tips, that's on thing I need lots of work on.

I ♥ it!

You write so well

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, your writing is great too.

Your a very good writer :)

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

thx!

aww, that was very sweet indeed!
The words were very nicely put together!! LLOOVVVEEDD IITT!!

Posted: Sep 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Sweet, thx

this was wonderful! your play on words was very effective! i like how, despite how nasty it is to picture rotting corpses, you cant help but feel affection and sympathy for them because of the what they stand for; even in death love endures :)
great job!

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

wow, thx



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