Suddenly Life Happened

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Poem By: Akihcur
Romance

Tags: suddenly life lyf happened

A cute lil' poem bout finding that someone special..that's it.. View table of contents...

Submitted: Aug 22, 2008 Reads: 108 Comments: 2 Likes: 0

Wanted to get away

Wanted to break this way

Someone to take my care

Someone to take me away

But then one day as I was passing ur way

Suddenly life happened

Can u imagine (Whoa…oa…oa…o)

All the dreams came to life

And I didn’t even have to try

Coz as u became mine (U r mine)

For a never ending time

I knew that I would always, always smile

U hold me tight

When I don’t feel right (every night)

U make me smile

With just ur eyes

U’re my light

In the moonless night

DO u know when I met u I realized

Suddenly life happened

Can u imagine (Whoa…oa…oa…o)

All the dreams came to life

And I didn’t even have to try

Coz as u became mine (U’ll always be mine)

For a never ending time

I knew that I would always, always smile!

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Comments:

sitting ponderer

great... expressed very precisely, but be careful with the words, you are not supposed to use jargon like "coz" in your poems :p keep writing, you've got what it takes to write a poem :p

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi...thank u so much..i really appreciate ur comment..n I'l keep that in mind next time..:)
thanks a lot again..

meteorite

i liked it, but im not sure it lived up to its title.

Posted: Aug 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi...thnk u..n I'll keep that in mind next tym..:)

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