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My Secret Truth

Poem By: AllyDee
Romance


Its another chatty peice.
I was really talkitive the day I wrote this.
Its about telling the truth to the person you love
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Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 49    Comments: 6    Likes: 3   


key.jpg lock n key image by AsianLover123

My Secret Truth

By AllyDee

The secret
That little thing I'm hiding
You really want to know?
You want to know the truth?
The truth
My lock and key secret
is that I
I can't say it
You still want to know?
Fine,
I'll tell you
The truth is...
My secret is...
I love you
I've loved you since,
Forever.


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stephhlebreton
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sorry, I'm not logged into my account, lol. I was too lazy, but anywho, this was really cute ally. So well written, I loved it. really sweet.
Steph(:

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!
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really cute ally i def love this awesome work
XD!!!
DOM!!!

Posted: Aug 8, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

Aww thats awesome!! I love it!!

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

how sweeeeeeeetttt!!:D
aaaa the way in the end that you reveal the truth after saying that you're not gonna reveal anything....its soo adorable
i love the structure and the whole thing =]
rly rly great work ^^
LOVE it =]

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!!
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LOVE IT!!! =D

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

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That's so sweet!!! I love it, wonderful job! =)
~Maple

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!



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