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What is This Life??

Poem By: Courtnee25
Romance


What exactly is life?

A taunting question,

A lingering emotion,

A single tear of regret perhaps?
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Submitted: Nov 1, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


                            What is this Life?

What exactly is life?

A taunting question,

A lingering emotion,

A single tear of regret perhaps?

 

What is MY life?

A black hole,

A friendless stroll,

Maybe a UN healed scar?

 

I have waited forever for the answer,

Left waiting for my partner like a lonely dancer,

What is this life?

A mass of smog filled disaster,

Sticky like UN removable plaster,

 

I cry for you,

All that I can do is wait for you,

All that I can wish of you is that you are here,

To ketch my falling tears,

To save the remainder of my dignity,

 

 

We may wish life gets better,

But as time wears on,

So does the letter,

Meant to be sent,

But lost in the mail,

 

Nothing can improve a love that’s impaled,

Nothing can heal a scar too deep,

And like this planet,

We are but UN healable,

UN lovable,

UN remember able,

 

This life, what exactly is it?

No one can answer,

But long to wish they could do just that,

To heal the scars on both ourselves and our world,

To join the unity of an UN breakable bond,

Between two star-crossed lovers,

 

If love was made by Shakespeare,

We would all be dead,

But if love was lost,

God would die in our stead.


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Comments:

Once again, your work has 'wowed' me! I love it!

Posted: Nov 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks, I appretiate your comments!

Poppie
(not registered user)

Wow that's really good.

Posted: Nov 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks!

Nice!

Posted: Nov 5, 2008

Author Comment:

THANKS!

i love this a lot. i really really do, it has a lingering question that will never be answer, i dont even think god know. but he probably will. this is deep and emotiona;. i just wish everyon ewould make poems like this.

Posted: Dec 3, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks a lot, good to know my work is appretiated, but seriously, no stealing, or I will litteraly stalk and murder you >D

*screams and crys in corner* i would never steal anyones work, plus in school this one kid did that to my work i was so mad i almost beat the crap out of her or was it a him i dont know but i wasnt and will not steal anything of any writters writings, i just wanted to know that

Posted: Dec 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol 'tis okey, but 'tis a warning XD



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