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Submitted: Feb 1, 2008 Reads: 65 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
How can all the wonderful sounds,
Be heard all at once,
Through your voice,
How can all the sweetest scents,
Be smelt all at once,
Through your cologne,
How can all the most breathtaking sights,
Be seen all at once,
Through your eyes,
How can all the best feelings,
Be felt all at once,
Through your touch,
How can a lifetime,
Be lived so perfect,
Because I lived it with you.
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Posted: Feb 1, 2008
Beautiful poem, true feeling. Please check out my sttuuffss.
Posted: Feb 4, 2008
Erin:
As Booksie deleted all ratings given prior to October 1, 2007, I just went through your postings and gave each of them an "I Like It." vote.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Feb 23, 2008
Very sweet, each stanza came out wonderfully :D
And how true!!!!
Take care!
Posted: Feb 26, 2008
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