This is a poem I wrote while in class. It's rough but I will still enter it.
The story is that there are two people who care for each other. It didn't work the first time, now their on the same path again except that the roles they play are reversed.
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Submitted: Oct 10, 2008
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Hello Hello
Boy that I like
Has life been
Treating you right?
Hello Hello
What will you do
If what you did to me
Happens to you?
I believe my sweet
You now know it’s real
To know what you want
And be unsure of how you feel
Tell me please
Did your heart pain
To want something
It seemed like you’d never gain?
Because you see my dear
We both know
How the story ends.
Will we go down this road again?
We’ve been here before
Why are we back again?
I won’t take anymore
And unfortunately
I may lose a friend.
Will it be you again?
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Comments:
wow...I lovvvve the rhythm. This is so nice! I like how (at least from what I see from the poem) you have a sense of like pessimism and hope at the same time. I'm here for you if you want to vent or anything. Keep writing and making use of your talent!
~mucho amor~
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
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