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Not This Again

Poem By: joy in love 4 ever
Romance


This is a poem I wrote while in class. It's rough but I will still enter it.

The story is that there are two people who care for each other. It didn't work the first time, now their on the same path again except that the roles they play are reversed. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 10, 2008    Reads: 19    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Hello Hello

Boy that I like

Has life been

Treating you right?

 

Hello Hello

What will you do

If what you did to me

Happens to you?

 

I believe my sweet

You now know it’s real

To know what you want

And be unsure of how you feel

 

Tell me please

Did your heart pain

To want something

It seemed like you’d never gain?

 

Because you see my dear

We both know

How the story ends.

Will we go down this road again?

 

We’ve been here before

Why are we back again?

I won’t take anymore

And unfortunately

I may lose a friend.

 

Will it be you again?


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Comments:

wow...I lovvvve the rhythm. This is so nice! I like how (at least from what I see from the poem) you have a sense of like pessimism and hope at the same time. I'm here for you if you want to vent or anything. Keep writing and making use of your talent!

~mucho amor~

Posted: Oct 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Much love to you too my dear. And you were right, there is hope in the poem :-) And thanks for your offer to allow me to vent, that means much to me. :-)

Stay faithful
Stay True

~Tisha



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