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Poem By: trudetrude
Romance


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Submitted: Feb 26, 2008    Reads: 59    Comments: 2    Likes: 3   


She's got a smile like no other

sweet as a child looking up to mother

like the sun's first kiss at the break of morning

it will touch your heart without any warning

Her eyes shine like a diamond in the middle of a cluster

to dare to stare back takes all the courage i could muster

Her voice will warm your soul and her laugh would lighten any moment dull

Her touch is like something iv'e never felt

it's like holding an angle, It would make theĀ coldest man melt

Her beauty gets hold of you right down into the core

I'd walk a thousand miles to be with her just once more.


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Comments:

trudetrude:

Well written. Good rhyming scheme. Tells a lovely story as well as touching upon tender emotions. Gave it an "I Like It." vote.

Will read and rate your other postings now.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Feb 26, 2008

it's nice. invite more readers to comment on it. ;-)

Posted: May 8, 2008



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