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One Thousand

Short Story By: kami
Romance


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Those are the day that you wish you had never gone back. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 22, 2008    Reads: 33    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


A thousand sodden pedals dipositioned on the mosaic, tears gliding down her tanned, uneven mascara face. The ache in the pit of her stomach worried her. She could only remember tonight -what had happened, it kept running through her head. The thought of his back walking away was sending chills down her spine.

  The white-laced evening gown flattened around her. The glass of red thick wine tipped to the ground and poured into a puddle, her hand swathed around the stem. The reflection in the wine was dull, her crystal blue eyes shined. Lying beside the window, the grey drapes- that matched the white brick walls-blew. The room is empty, hollow, quiet. A sudden bell of sirens wailed through the city, slamming on car doors, and the odd voice of a man. A knock at the door, then a burst of a foot kicked the door as it swung open with a bang. Footsteps became louder and louder. Her pensive face stared at the empty rose, her skin flush. The strength of someone lifted her up and a quite whisper cried "I love you", wet warm tears dripped to her chest, there was no response, and not even a heart beat.


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That is so good! I absolutely love your writing style, it is amazing! I will definitely be reading more of your works, please let me know when more is posted! Wonderful story teller you are. =)
~Maple

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Why thank-you, you are veru kind.

This is totally awesome and i once again agree with maple your writing style is totally amazing!! I will so be reading more of your creations keep me updated!!
XoXo
DOM!!!
XD

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Amazing writing style, I agree. Please keep me updated also. I love your work.

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

you should write somthing more cheerful

Posted: Jul 22, 2008



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