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No. More. Pain.

Novel By: cantlive4evr
Young Adult


FINISHED - Fourteen year old Leah has endured endless amounts of pain and cruelty from her father. Leah isn't allowed to have friends, but then she finds Todd, who won't give up on her. She meets Leila, who she can tell everything to. What happens when everything takes a turn for the worse when Leah gets pregnant? Find out! P.S. This is my first novel ever, so don't say anything horribly bad please. Constructive critism is welcome :] View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 13, 2008    Reads: 160    Comments: 16    Likes: 2   


I didn't leave the hospital then, though. The doctors found out that I had been beaten, from all of my scars. They also found signs of a rape, and I confirmed it was true. I had to tell the police my father's name, what he looked like, and where we had lived. I also had to tell them a description of the man that had raped me, almost twice. Todd didn't recieve any charges of having a gun without a permit, because he was using it as self defense. He saved me from another rape, and there is no ultimate way I could thank him.
The police caught my father and he has been sent to jail. They found the man that had raped me dead in a dumpster behind a grocery store. All the signs say it was suicide. My dad will be spending the rest of his life in jail. Actually, it's the highest security jail in the area.
Todd and I got married August second. I go to therapy every Tuesday for my raping. Hope is now a healthy, three year old. It's hard to believe it's been that long. Todd said she looks a LOT like me, and I choose to believe him.
It's now December fifth, and guess what? I'm 5 months pregnant with me and Todd's son! Things are still going strong between Todd and me, and Hope can't wait for her own little brother. I guess you could say we're a happy little family. And, my father brings me no more pain.
Oh, but bad news. My father broke out of jail.

THE END!

*Sniff sniff sob* I love happy endings >:}. I'll be coming out with a sequel to this, don't worry! The first chapter of the sequel is already out! It's called,"What They Don't Teach You In School". Go check it out!!


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Comments:

-runs around screaming- I love it!!!!! I cant wait for the sequel. I cant believe he broke out of jail though. >=( oh well we'll see what happens. =)
~Mandy

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you liked it. I'm thinking of starting the sequel tomorrow. :D

ok i love the ending but he broke out wow way to break out the bad news at the end will ya

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Yep! I'm kinda like that.

Oh, I luv this! It's beautiful! You're just such a dang awesome writer!

But as for daddy breaking out of jail:
I SAW IT COMING MAN!

So-o-o going to read the next story!

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. Thanks!! I'm really glad so many people appreciate it! I went to my email this morning, and it said I had 33 COMMENTS! So, I came here..and blah blah blah..

HOL-LY-SHIT!

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Ummm...are you saying that as a good thing, a bad thing, or a surprised thing? :D

I was expecting a totally different ending! But WOW great story! Todd is so ridiculously perfect, I was almost in tears every time he was being all lovey-dovey!

One question, though. I thought I was all smart picking up on some foreboding about Todd. When Leah mentioned that she wondered why Todd wasn't driving with anyone even though he had just got his license, and when she wondered why Todd's parents never answered, I thought maybe there would be some huge twist where Todd wasn't who he said he was or something. Did you purposely do that or did I just turn it into something completely different than what you intended?

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe...I guess you'll see :P(In the sequel of course :D)

I didn't comment throughout the story because I was to into it to stop and write/type (instead I gave "likes"). I loved it!
-Courtney

Posted: Aug 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

I loved it...but why'd you make him break out of jail? Couldn't you have left it at the happy part?? lol.

Posted: Aug 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Nah...As much as I love happy endings, this one just had to end like that.

this is great!! *going to the sequel!!*

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Note: I'm trying to work on sequel as much as I can, but with school coming up, my schedule's very busy, so the chapters won't come out fast.

torie
(not registered user)

oh my god!!!
i love this story!!! i couldnt stop reading it!
your an amazing writer!

Posted: Aug 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Really? Thanks! :D

gawd kill the dad already give him a death sentence

Posted: Aug 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Heh not yet

oh geez...im going to read the sequel now....yeah...

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

heh :}

this story was so good. i read it all from start to finish no stops at all. great job

Posted: Aug 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! :}

I love this! and i usually don't read anything but vampire stuff!

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :}

im not happy with the dad breaking out not one bit missie:(
but i really liked it .....................

Posted: Sep 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, and I don't think anyone is happy about the dad breaking out. Glad you enjoyed it!!!

kudos to u...father breaking out of jail...surprise surprise

Posted: Oct 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Ha, yep. That's how I am. Thanks for reading!

DAMMIT!!! FFUUUUCCCKK!!!
NO NO NOOOO!! CAN I KILL HER DAD PLZZZ!!



awww shes having another baby!! aww!

Posted: Jan 2, 2009

Author Comment:

LOL. I love your multiple personalities. First your all AHH I WANNA KILL HIM then AWWW!! She's having another baby!



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