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Retaliation Prologue

Novel By: Toejones
Young Adult


Vampires~♥ View table of contents...

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Submitted: Aug 27, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 0    Likes: 0   


Prologue:

 
     This story starts strangely, I’ll admit that. It starts by critiquing some other stories about vampires (yes I know, very strange, right?). For instance: Buffy the Vampire Slayer; I’ve been a fan forever, it’s a great show (don’t get me wrong here!), but they have some wrong views on vampires and other creatures.
     Vampires do have souls (well…not whole ones) actually. Many are quite nice, really. And the whole ‘burned by holy water and crosses’ soiree is very cliché and very much B.S. I’ve met religious vampires (Christians included). The little bit about beheading and burning is right too…it’s just a lot messier than staking them…
     Then there’s the Twilight series. Oh my gosh! These are the best books ever written, and they’ve got so many creative ideas! I could’ve never thought of having them sparkle in the sun! Sadly, though, they do burn up right to a crisp in the sun, unless they put on sunscreen (again: don’t ask me why), which I find quite funny. Edward sounds so gorgeous. OH! There’s another thing. Vampires really are quite a lot prettier or more handsome than human men and women. I don’t get it, but it is a perk! They do have a reflection. I don’t get why people would say otherwise…They’re flesh and bone just like us humans…well…that is if you are human.
     I’m sorry I had to do that. I needed you all to have the facts strait before I delved too deep into the story, and didn’t want confusion clouding your minds (you need a wide open mind for this, mind you all), or have to interrupt the story.
     I’m Skye Edenstein. My job is to cut down the big bad monsters that try to harm little kiddies and such. This is the story of when my job got too hard for just one combat-trained rough-n’-tough girl. This is the story of the Vampire Queen (name unknown) and her resistance.


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